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I think Cole finds another author to end her essay because she found it the best way to keep the reader engaged. Instead of her talking she switched it up and put another author in. Maybe she couldn't find the right words to say so she found someone else who could say it in other words. I think the essay would have been a little more boring if she paraphrased Schrodinger because then the readers wouldn't be able to think for themselves. They wouldn't be able to interpret it the way they wanted. if Cole changed her ending it would have a different effect. Every reader has a different opinion. I feel like if she ended it with her first sentence it would be kind of abrupt if the reader didn't know it came from the beginning and seeing how the essay is pretty long this could happen. I like the way she ended it, with a different authors perspective. Cole using different authors throughout the essay to help back up points and support statements. It helps the reader know that this isn't just a theory from Cole and that others think about this too.